The long day ahead

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    The long day ahead

     I woke up this morning with a song in my heart
    I felt free and happy and glad to be alive
    This was the day I would liberate me
    From you.
    You are mean and curmudgeonly and I, fragile
    and meek. You hurt me with your words and
    Actions not caring what impact they had.
    I am donr, done, done and ready to move on
    And the long day ahead....

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    poeticmike commented on The long day ahead

    02-11-2011

    Beautiful piece. I love your words their so powerful & very much juxtapositional with what ive been through also. I look forward to reading more of your work dear....
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    copergirl commented on The long day ahead

    01-12-2011

    OH how nice. I like the mystery--so many things can be interpreted from this. Fine job, Willa
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    BrokenHeart2009 commented on The long day ahead

    01-11-2011

    Way to go and to put it in words to. Sometimes we have to move on when we are not being treated right. Good Luck.
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    willaj1978

    01/11/2011

    Thank you

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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