The Morning In lieu of Dreamscapes...

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Just something new I wanted to share...I felt good about it this morning as I woke up.

The Morning In lieu of Dreamscapes...

I am but a dream, escaping my mind
I am but a dream, erased, sublime
I am but a dream, nightmarish inside
I am but dreamscape, nomenclature collides.

In the morning as I awake to sunlight's surprise
In the morning as I awake to mirrored eyes
In the morning as I awake to newness disguised
In the morning I take it upon me to smile.

Such a simple thing to do, neglected in life
The smile is the highlighted soul showing face
I take a break from rhyme to prose what I mean
I mean to live life to reach my potential
Maybe one day surpassing its cool
Heating the night sky in breathless testament
These are a few things that live on in the dreamscape
One day all shall manifest, I hopefully pray.

I am but a woman, strong in my gentleness
I am but a woman, emotional, confessed
I am but a woman, yearning for the best
I am the woman, strong beneath my cest.

The tender nature, my heart, beneath my breast
The curvature upon my chest, hides what's best
But luckily I find easy to manifest
The nature of my heart, mind, and soul to the rest.
I am dreamscape in the morning as I awake
My eyes to the mirror cause pause to meditate
I am dreamscape in newness disguised
I take it upon me in the sunlight to share my smile....

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mustascheman commented on The Morning In lieu of Dreamscapes...

04-28-2010

Cool! Creates a sensation of positive energy from line to line. Well written, I like this poem. But somewhere near the end, you wrote 'breast'! (hehehehehe). (Don't be offended, I'm just silly that way)

dreamscape

04/28/2010

It is fine M&M, it made me smile to read it lol. Thank you for visiting my page. ;)

stefy commented on The Morning In lieu of Dreamscapes...

04-26-2010

You described the dreams and emotions in interesting way.I really enjoy in it!!!

dreamscape

04/28/2010

Thank you so much for the comment stefy.

Musicmynded1 commented on The Morning In lieu of Dreamscapes...

04-26-2010

Very nice.... should be ur bio at best, for at least a little while.

Altair commented on The Morning In lieu of Dreamscapes...

04-25-2010

O yea!!! You are dreamscape, I hear you roar so loudly and soft. This is wonderful, it has everything one can ask for in a self testament of a poem. Rhyme, prose, transition and flows. Beautiful, I am adding this to the faves. I am glad to see a new piece from you, it is favored indeed.

dreamscape

04/26/2010

yay, thank you so much altair, it is great that in the one comment I got thus far on this, it was you. I am so glad you liked it, I was kinda inspired by a favored poet, I would like to thank him too. =)

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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