The Ones Against Cail

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  • Fantasy
    • CailOfTarnak
    • Cail is at the start of his story just begining with many changes to come

    The Ones Against Cail

    The ones against Cail were irrational and cruel 
    The ones against Cail were some of which ruled

    The ones against Cail were composed of hate
    The ones against Cail were many and great

    The ones against Cail tasted no dread
    The ones against Cail souls were stained with red

    The ones against Cail condemned with a fate
    The ones against Cail with a punish so great

    The ones against Cail had to get Cail or fall
    The ones against Cail and suffer for all

    The ones against Cail for the things they had done
    The ones against Cail for the many great evils to some

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    Desmotti commented on The Ones Against Cail

    01-12-2010

    I love it...Cail is one against many. I think that him knowing this will prove to be a great asset...he will reach inside himself and pull out the talents needed to overcome such great adversity and tremendous obsticle.
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