The Start of Exile

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  • Fantasy
    • CailOfTarnak
    • Cail is at the start of his story just begining with many changes to come

    The Start of Exile

    The start of exile was bitter and sweet
    But Cail needed to be swift and fleet

    He twisted and turned as he ran away
    His freedom was clearly not easy to play

    The game was difficult unlike normal life
    Filled with dread and fear on an erie night

    The taste in his mouth was filled with sour and dread
    and evil voices would not come out of his head

    The start of exile he did not want to play
    for all of the consequences he'd have to pay

    He had to do this because of what he did not do
    But he had some things he had to do too

    When he went to jail he started to pray
     That he would live another day

    He soon escaped, into the night
    But  he soon would do some things that may grant him sight

    To see why these things would happen to him
    And to halt the great evil, to fight and to win

    The start of exile was dangerous, not slow
    but without some help the evil will grow

    Into something cruel but unique
    And put the young boy named Cail forever to sleep

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    Desmotti commented on The Start of Exile

    11-28-2009

    My Nephew has the spark of genius...and all who read of Cail will know only that his adventures are ferociously engaging. I am so excited to read all of the chapters that you have in store for us. You are brilliant...Logan....pure genius.

    Teardrops commented on The Start of Exile

    11-27-2009

    such talent for an 11 year old the poem is wonderful

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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