The Pumpkin Carver

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This poem was written during my last year in the corporate world.
I think the metaphor worked well.

The Pumpkin Carver

just because I cut open
your head and scooped out
all the things I didn't want
wet slimy stringy brains
and slippery seeds of ideas

just because I gouged your face
making your eyes look straight
slicing a new view to my liking
opening your mouth when I was ready

doesn't mean you have to insist
on sitting there dead and empty
feeling your own slow rot
and refusing me anything
but that crooked smile


                             © Chuck Beals

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simoneaugustus commented on The Pumpkin Carver

10-12-2009

Great analogy! And perfect timing for the upcoming holiday. A very unique view of a tradition taken for granted. Well done!

BlueHeron

10/12/2009

thanx for such positive energies...they will grow new smiles

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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