Valentino

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Valentino

I'm no Valentino
 
I wouldn't buy candy
to find sweet love
filled with soft nougat centers
offer greenhouse flowers
bitten cold by night air
or diamonds forever
only in loud magazines
 
I'd write a story
full of ridiculous promises
chapters of passion
written in the forbidden languages
of ancient civilizations
lost at sea
 
I'd play music
composed in night sweats
melodies of moonlight
vibrating from the tarnished brass
of a saxophone dream
with a backbeat of why not
 
I'd lie in wait
a stalker of infatuation
dressed like a grinning jester
dancing the quick steps
of a hungry cat
 
I'd offer collections
of beachglass and beer coasters
small scribbled stanzas
lining the windows
framing a red rose sunrise
on a kiss-ass day
 
I'd pour the wine of pharoah's
kept in sky temples
aged in hidden oak casks
and tended for a century
by timid maidens of mystery
in ancient folk tales
 
I'd lock the doors of yesterday
and trade a year of my madness
for one let loose adventure
of lub dub heart beat freedom
and a valentine surprise
 
                                           © Chuck Beals  

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gmcookie commented on Valentino

03-02-2011

I'm with you, my friend. Let's put the pedal to the metal and see if there is any life left out there... If nothing else, it will give us some memories to carry into the twilight of our frequently dour existence.

ApaqRasgirl commented on Valentino

07-17-2010

OH I loved this one, the picture painted with your words that flowed so smooth made me feel as if I could see you doing all those things. great write thanks for sharing. love asha

Teardrops commented on Valentino

07-12-2010

I compare nature a lot with my work and your poems are really good My fav is POe and you rank in the top ten along with him thanks for the read Marie

Springsize commented on Valentino

02-14-2010

having found your poem through friends, I've enjoyed reading your unusual gifts, listed in the not for sale section. I love to be reminded of the heart's true need... to feel special; and your adventures into wordland, bringing back such unusual strings of colored adjectives. You also have great pictures

BlueHeron

02/14/2010

my writing has been stalled for years...and then something in the breeze...a light through the trees...secrets revealed...like you

summerrose35 commented on Valentino

02-14-2010

This is good.No flowery words just a good dose of reality! I like the style! great read

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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