THE SCORPION NIGHT

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    THE SCORPION NIGHT

    The day was cool and deathly lonely
    It was indeed a dark saturday
    The thundering rain was not helping matters
    The tumult of the cool night invited the scorpion to lay siege
    though his visit was treasable from an uncement hole
    All I know it was the scorpion night.

    Piously walking to the louvers was the chief of the house
    The room was dark but the road was not blind.
    It was thundering, raining and lightening.
    Oh drop of water on my piano, the gift of my service year
    As I move to make a stop with a vile kiss the intruder stunk
    And like a needle it pieced through my bones and blood
    Like the movement of an hurricane

    Oh scorpion my unwelcomed visitor in the darkest corner of my room
    Why did you choose this forlone night of all
    A shout was heard, it was the chief of the house.
    Alas! He is a clown said the helper.This he does to attract attention.
    A doctor was called.
    The battle line between David and goliath was drawn
    The intruder was destroyed
    The chief of the house, the victor won the fight.

     

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    kpeery09 commented on THE SCORPION NIGHT

    05-26-2010

    Very Nice on creativity with this one. It is truly fantastic by the imagery. I give you another 10.

    scrye commented on THE SCORPION NIGHT

    07-29-2009

    Great read njay very creative, i love the imagery i get while reading this. Very well done my friend.

    dragonfly1023 commented on THE SCORPION NIGHT

    07-29-2009

    a very creative incounter between scorpion and man ending luckily well for the victim. great write NJay. looks like the helper has some issues :D

    NJay

    07/30/2009

    Thanks dragon. I appreciate it. Have you checked shipwreck of my honeymoon?

    photochick commented on THE SCORPION NIGHT

    07-25-2009

    great imagery and imagination you have enjoyed this one alot look forward to reading more

    Dreamer123 commented on THE SCORPION NIGHT

    07-20-2009

    This is great! being imaginative and creative with your surroundings but keeeping you story or message in place. Awesome. I would agree that a scorpion should be unwelcomed as well. I love it!!

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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