ECHOES FROM HOME

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A mono dramatic poem  full of emotions, loss to a foreign land and the mixed feelings of returning home and not able fit in the system or place once call home.

ECHOES FROM HOME

I hear the call from home.
An inevitable call from a surrogative mother.
Going Home is meaningless but full of hope.
Alas! It has a sentimental place in my heart.
I cannot go home, yet here I am.
Oh! Africa, how will I trace my root?

I hear the echoes of my home
A call from a land whose ancestors were forced into slavery
In some way I must go home.
But why this flood of emotions?
Could it be the awakening of the memories hidden in my genes?
Oh! the two extremes between which I am trapped.

I hear the voices calling from home.
The voices and dances from the moonlight festival.
Africa, the land of my ancestors.
Africa the symbol of my significance
Though away from you so long in a foreign land
I can still smell the aroma of your ebony beauty.

I hear the echoes of drums calling from home.
Alas! I am different.
I do not feel African and not wholly American.
The thought of running into my kindred terrify me
For in him lies my proof.

I hear the beasts from home
Oh! home your call faints in my heart
No more like the ardent pilgrim longing to return home.
I receive the call with mixed feelings to know where home once was.
Oh! African, how much of me is really me?
How much of being black has been carried out of Africa.

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Lolee commented on ECHOES FROM HOME

08-08-2009

You show such ambivalence here, yet with such pain and consternation. This is truly a work of art and aptly put. Thanks for sharing this with us.

Legos12 commented on ECHOES FROM HOME

07-31-2009

Very Nice njay, Im not of Black descent, but I have a good number of friends who are and they ask this same question about themselves. It lets me see into you world a little bit, which is refreshing. I like seeing things from the viewpoints of others. Well done, thanks for writing this

joshkingston commented on ECHOES FROM HOME

07-29-2009

i like this one it fills like it came from the hart

NJay

07/30/2009

Thanks josh for the comment. It actually came from the heart. I also posted one on Shipwreck of my honeymoon. It is dearest to my heart. I will appreciate your comment. I read your poem and gave you a 10. Thanks

theguider commented on ECHOES FROM HOME

07-20-2009

Yes definitely this is encouraging for me and i must say another good work from you has being unveiled,i am really waiting for me

Dreamer123 commented on ECHOES FROM HOME

07-18-2009

This poem is so amazing! You share your emotions and what you think is right. This is touching, i like the first line because the call of home is where you feel like your at home. Thanks for sharing. great write. :D

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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