Thirst

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  • Inspirational

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    Continuously thirst for life and never cease to quench the minds need to be nourished.

    Thirst

     Thirst

     

    I have a thirst for life and for understanding - a thirst that is unquenchable.

     

    I stand at he edge of life and cannot comprehend the endless opportunities, nor the vastness of knowledge that multiplies in it’s own existence.

     

    If I were to drink from the ocean of awareness every eternal moment I would never be able to drain the waters of wisdom dry.

     

    My comprehension of this ceaseless flow just increases my internal need to experience the immeasurable

     

    If I never stop pouring from the seas of learning then my cup of gained intelligence will never empty.

     

    May I not obtain failure simply because I have failed to realize unachieved abilities

     

     

    J.H.

     

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    danmartyjake1 commented on Thirst

    09-05-2009

    Complete and perfect,..................enjoyed reading this very much.
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    StandingBear commented on Thirst

    08-09-2009

    A nicely written work full of zest for life and learning.
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    Seek2BInspired

    08/10/2009

    Thank you for reading and appreciating!

    BlkQueen commented on Thirst

    08-08-2009

    I'm really speechless. This is so powerful. Excellent job!
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    Seek2BInspired

    08/10/2009

    Speechless, really - what an honor you pay me. I will be honored to read your written voice - thank you!

    optimistic commented on Thirst

    08-08-2009

    This is once again a great write fabolous in the words of hope.
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    Seek2BInspired

    08/10/2009

    My friend I am always so very grateful to have you read and comment on my pieces. Thank you SW

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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