Thoughts of you

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Okay this one I wrote a little over a year ago after a huge fight with my ex boyfriend. It was when i first started writing. I know that he can't see this but I want to thank him for hurting me as bad as he did, because if he didn't I never would have continued to write.

Thoughts of you

your longing for lust  
the pain that i feel
what you wanted so badley
but what i could not reveal

I lay awake thinking
I fall asleep hoping
I wish you were here
I wish you knew what was real

i go day by day,
I go living my life
hoping that one day,
everything will be right

the scar in my heart
the tears in my eyes
if only this horid pain
would meet its demise

its happened so often
I dont know how much more i can take
you left me so empty
turned out it was fake

i thought that u loved me
i thought that u cared
but because of something stupid
your love wasnt there

you broke me again
and you shattered my heart
i should have listened
to the ones that knew from the start

i gave everything up
hoping you would be true
i changed for you
i ached for you

what i did wasnt good enough
you always wanted more
even if it ment losing
what was already there

baby you were my only
you were my one
i had no control
over what was going on

you told me you hate me
But you said that you love me
you said that you want me
But you threw me away

I knew that it was coming
and you did to
But we wouldnt stop
until we were threw

Now You wont talk to me
now you dont care
you left me in peices
you left me dispared

I would tell you that i love you
But i dont see the point
I'd tell you i'll never let go
But im not hanging on

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nanoboy909 commented on Thoughts of you

06-25-2009

Love is pain and there's so much to gain you can complain and try to explain but nothing will ever be the same...

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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