Tangle Up

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    I wrote this poem because this is life. I was in love with somebody a year and a half ago. We broke up . That hit me very hard and I been letting God fix my broken heart. It sometime flurs up the love I feel for him because my love was real. I ask God everyday to give me strength and teach me to let go. Because when I love somebody I love somebody. But I am happy that I have God in my life because He's helping through this. He knows I'm human and I cant do this without him. God is the best thing that happen to me, he brought me a might long way.

    Tangle Up

    My heart Aches for something old
    everyday I push on to let go
    keeping my feelings and love
    trap in a spider web
    squeezing it tighter
    so it  want slip
    or come apart
    what i feel in my heart
    is
    stronger
    then the spider  in its web
    standing by to get its prey
    The love I feel, I keep it trap in the past
    feeling so stupid, he's not coming back
    cause it almost been two years
    knowing the truth bring me in tears
    just can't shake the feeling
    let go and move on
    my heart is heavy
    aches for something old
    his smile
    his face
    him near and close to me
    aches for his love
    never will be
    wake up
    stop being the fool
    He will never love
    you
    can't you see!



    Wakeitha Kilpatrick
    Copy right 8/6/2011

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    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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