Torn in Two

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    Torn in Two

    My heart is torn between two..

    Can't decide what's the best thing to do.

    Either way I loose..

    Either way I win.

    Everyday I think - can't seem to get

    to an answer...

    My heart starts pounding faster and my

    hands begin to shake.

    My heart is being torn between the two..

    This whole situation is making me ill -

    Physically, emotionally and mentally.

    Oh what am I going to do?

    Please heart of mine give me a sign...

    My heart has been torn in two by the

    both of you!



    Written 12/4/2008 @ 11:15 a.m.

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    xxlheart commented on Torn in Two

    01-29-2009

    seems to be a sincere poem and i adore raw and real poetry from the life of the writer. the poem is simple yet digs deep into your thoughts. great work!!

    rollerderby commented on Torn in Two

    01-21-2009

    Well done dear, I hope your heart has found the decision it takes to remove the doubt from the life you love. It can only end one of two ways! Doug

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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