Touching Her

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    • is exhausted jus stoppin thru more poems coming soon and I will get in touch with each of you who took the time out to respond to my poems. Thanks so much.

    Touching Her

    I know that it has been rough between the two of you,
    the gambling, the drinking, arguing and fuss
    You never had the ingredient to make it all be true
    because you never gave and she never gave simple trust
    no communication, no exhalation, no love making
    just a night cap turned to rust, same old stuff
    I am use to it dance, no intention of romance, just love gone to ashes, and ashes turned to dust
    I watched you both cry and both of you deny
    that you want to be in other places
    but you keep holding on to a woman that has been gone
    congratulations, this information is what you need to get on
    Kittens do purr and have fur in many shades and graces
    I am the mistress to your love and touching her is my relation
    she kisses me softly and confides everything in me, about you, but I cannot go on any further until there is a her without you. I am the one touching her, and filling in all of your gaps
    her best friend from childhood, we still talk about our mishaps, I cant stand to see her miserable with a man so arrogant like you, instead she needs to be right here with a heroin like me.

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    butbychanz commented on Touching Her

    06-10-2009

    Oooooooooooo....! It is what it is .... Truuth...doesn't allways allign itself with peoples comfortabilities....but it allways unearths their sensibilities.....I hope he got a chance to read this.......It might allow him to set her free....!

    nook commented on Touching Her

    06-09-2009

    You did a really good job! You have a gifted soul i see. i lked it but i was a little confused. Are you the one who is in love with your bestfriend? Can you fill me in on the end?

    dance123 commented on Touching Her

    06-08-2009

    This poem is really nice. I don`t understand basically what the poem is about. I liked your inspiration.

    jannifer commented on Touching Her

    06-06-2009

    that is so whatz up i love ur poems u r a great poet and i love the way u express ur true self

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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