When we was young

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    When we was young

    When we was young we use to play in the sandbox in the summer.
    When we was young we use to make snow angels.
    When we was young we use to have snow ball fights.
    When we was young we use to sit at my moms house and have hot coco.
    When we was young we use to spend every single minute together.
    When we was young we use to laugh,cry together.
    When we was young we made a promise to never let anyone or anything come between us.
    But it all changed when we went to high school you found a new best friend and a new love.
    You said I was your bestest friend still.
    But i knew you was lieing I could feel it.
    I can hear it in your voice.
    I felt all alone you was spending all your time with her.
    I was left in the dust.
    I see you take her to all the favorite places we use to go.
    I see you doing all the things we use to do.
    I wondered why you never asked me out I loved you.
    I see you in the hall ways you just walk by looking at me and dont say a word.
    You stop and turn around.
    I see something different about you.
    I see hurt and pain like I been feeling.
    I hear you call my name I ignore you and keep on walking.
    I wanted you to feel how I felt when my best friend ignored me.
    I hear people talking about you.
    The things I heard was so terrible.
    I run to find you I look everywhere for you.
    I thought for a minute and went to the very first place we met when we was young.
    You was there I smiled at you and you smiled at me.

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    windsongs commented on When we was young

    06-24-2011

    i had a best friend that had me do a show- i got booed off the stage! lol -i still love her! lol

    suscamiel

    06/24/2011

    lol awe glad you still friends :)

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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