THE GIRL IN MY MIRROR

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    THE GIRL IN MY MIRROR
    WHEN I LOOK IN THE MIRROR,
    I SEE A GIRL. THAT IS HURT INSIDE AND OUT.
    SOMETIMES I FEEL LIKE ME AND HER IS CONNECTED.
    I WISH I COULD TALK TO HER. TO FIND OUT WHATS WRONG.

    I WILL TELL HER ITS OK IM HERE FOR YOU,
    AND EVERYTHING WILL BE OK,
    AND YOU DONT HAVE TO SCARED.

    THE GIRL IN MY MIRROR IS CRYING,
    BECAUSE OF YOU. THE GIRL IN MY MIROOR IS ME.

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    mistyparish commented on THE GIRL IN MY MIRROR

    05-01-2009

    Good one almost makes you stop and think if you are really talking about you or not. Good write!
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    suscamiel

    06/23/2011

    thanks yes you do in deed

    cynthiakehl commented on THE GIRL IN MY MIRROR

    05-01-2009

    some1 rated this low because of spelling -0 anyway i
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    suscamiel

    06/23/2011

    was a typo lol

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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