IF I WERE YOUR LOVE

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    IF I WERE YOUR LOVE

    IF I WERE YOUR LOVE,
    YOU'D NEVER LOOK BACK.
    MY HEART OFFERS MORE,
    WHAT THE OTHER LACK.

    I'D GIVE YOU THE WORLD TO HOLD,
    ON A GOLD PLATTER.
    A RING ON YOUR FINGER,
    AND STAY FOREVER.

    WE'D KISS AND LOVE EVERY DAY AND NIGHT.
    I'D CALL YOU MY ONE TRUE LOVE,
    ON OUR NOON DELIGHTS.

    I'D BUY ANYTHING YOU WANT,
    AND DINE BY THE FIRE.
    DANCE UNDER THE MOON LIGHT,
    AND WHERE EVER YOU DESIRE.

    IF I WERE YOUR LOVE,
    YOU'D NEVER BE BLUE.
    EVERY DAY SPECIAL
    TO LIVE TO LOVE YOU.

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    tanmayC commented on IF I WERE YOUR LOVE

    12-09-2009

    this is a very simple poem and it reflects your innocence....i like it!!

    suscamiel

    06/23/2011

    Thanks :)

    SClark20xx commented on IF I WERE YOUR LOVE

    05-14-2009

    Doesn't need to be all caps.

    ClearlySays

    07/29/2011

    DON"T LISTEN TO HIM! I thought it was very pure and whimsical. I read a couple more of your poems and they all are honest and have a message behind them.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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