Without a Word

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    Without a Word

    Eyes are the window to the soul
    through them one can see
    the treasures that you hold
    digging deep without shovel or spade
    knowing truth before lies are made
    orchestrate the game thats played
    and forever more be aware
    the lost and found within your stare
    unwritten rules and sacrifice
    are so observant upon your eyes
    like reflective drops of color stained glass
    your truths and secrets
    they will unmask
    and one would never have to ask
    just sit and listen and realize
    that to read the soul you watch the eyes.....


    Nino

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    amamimichiyo commented on Without a Word

    05-18-2009

    PERFECT!!!! It has no flaws... i loved it so much...(",)
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    nhorlandi commented on Without a Word

    04-06-2009

    you're right from the beginning till the end. I noticed some lines are rhymed in the middle and at the end. Something unique. Anyway, my verdict is excellent...10+
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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