your worth unto me

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    your worth unto me

    forever I will endure
    press forward and ever reach higher
    I cannot move mountains
    so I simply climb over them
    step by step I continue on

    you are my everything

    when I am confronted with impossible odds
    beset by forces stronger than I
    surrounded by those that I can not dare overcome
    face to face with my own mortality
    fighting for my very existence and all that
    I am and will ever be

    you are my everything

    when I have attained my treasures
    halls of gold walls of platinum
    diamonds and rubies thrown about
    fame and fortune held in hand

    you are my everything

    I live the eternal struggle
    with strength of arm and battle ready
    acquiring riches and wealth
    and all this means nothing without you

    you are my everything

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    ladyd37 commented on your worth unto me

    04-27-2009

    dis is butiful tryd given it a 10 but the stupid computa wudn let me!! xcellent writing!!

    SusanLee commented on your worth unto me

    04-16-2009

    This poem automaticlly put some notes in my mind that I couldn't help but sing this to. I like this one although if put to an arrangement for repetition needs to balance just a teeny bit. Oh you know what I mean. Yeah I like this one.

    nhorlandi commented on your worth unto me

    04-15-2009

    this is what I call humble but brave enough to face the reality. Incredibly written, I love it. 10+

    leticiaharlan commented on your worth unto me

    03-22-2009

    it was good keep up the good work

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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