Would You Like to Be My Friend?

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  • Friendship

    Would You Like to Be My Friend?

    When I look into your eyes,
    I can tell your soul has been touched,
    And that you’ve seen more than sometimes you wished you would have.

    I can see that you’ve loved,
    That you’ve been hurt,
    And that you care about what’s right.

    When I see the words you convey,
    I can feel the person behind them
    Warm heart, so close and yet so far away.

    Like you, I’ve been touched at the core of my soul.
    I’ve seen much in life that I sometimes wish that I hadn’t.
    I’ve loved and been hurt but I care about what’s right.

    I don’t know what this is,
    I don’t know where this might lead,
    But there is something I’d really like to know,

    Would you like to be my friend?

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    lonewolf commented on Would You Like to Be My Friend?

    11-22-2009

    very nice. i really liked this piece. you seem very down home and warm hearted. thanks for sharing. and yes.... i'd like to be your friend

    california commented on Would You Like to Be My Friend?

    08-18-2009

    this is an excellent poem. I've enjoyed this so much, had to read it over and over.thanks for sharing, i will be back.california...

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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