2ND CHANCE

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    2ND CHANCE



    Shot once in the stomach and grazed in the head
    Now I lay quiet and almost dead
    Has someone turned out the light?
    Where is the darkness of the night?
    Is the other side?
    Is this the end of my ride?
    The next thing I hear is a voice so clear
    This voice was that of a doctor. And he said
    You have suffered a seizer as you laid in this bed
    You will live and you will be fine
    I have did my best with these old hands of mine
    But with this trauma I promise you this
    Your memories of the past you might miss
    I have returned to you the gift of live
    You may not remember all of your past
    And I cannot tell you how long this will last
    Now you have a second chance most don’t get
    If all else fails you never forget
    I carried you through this night
    Now it’s up to you to make things rite

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    nikkishaniqwa commented on 2ND CHANCE

    02-19-2009

    that one gave me chills

    sierra09 commented on 2ND CHANCE

    02-08-2009

    I really like this. It's profound but still realistic.

    Gizina commented on 2ND CHANCE

    02-02-2009

    The best gift of all! Life!Live it to the fullest!

    PRIESTESSMACK commented on 2ND CHANCE

    02-01-2009

    VERY MEANINGFUL AND A WONDERFUL WAY TO SUMMARIZE A TRAGEDY.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    DARKONE’s Poems (6)

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    GOOD-BYE 3
    2ND CHANCE 4
    MY REFRECTION IN THE MIRROR 5
    TO LATE 3
    THE GAME OF LIFE 1
    COLD DARK DAYS 2