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    look out-the future's coming

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    Time is a snotty place
    (look out-the future's coming)
    It fills up your promises 
    With unkept promises

    Saying no to things that hurt us
    Saying no to things that help us
    (look out-the future's coming)
    Till we don't car whay we are

    (look out-the future's coming)
    Keep standing in your forest
    The tree house safe from robins
    Still looking at the ground

    Time is still in hiding
     Probly somewhere in the basement
    The place for ghosts and pickles
    Old magazines - stray cats

    But something somewhere's rising
    (look out-the futur's coming)
    So pack up all your trifles 
     And RUN AWAY - the future's here 

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    toredbloodink commented on 3

    05-02-2017

    I laughed... Great write.. I believe your love for cats is a piece of the art... Paint a picture for cats I have done it before... Love and peace

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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