A Hero's Query

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    A Hero's Query

    Why do you look up to me, with my tattered constitution?

    The holes in my armor show weakness here not a mind for solution.

    I have not the strength to defend the world from the evil lurking there.

    I have very little tolerance for breathing their fouling air.

     

    The hero’s heart does not beat in my breast, with the strength of a hundred souls

    I do not stand proud with a warriors yell when the mighty thunder rolls.

    I look to my fortress when they come to confront and enforce their mighty status

    I hide behind the shields of the meek when deadly volley soar at us

     

    I’m not the warrior that others see when trouble comes to life

    I don’t have the stomach to handle the battles full of strife

    I don’t have the strength of a hundred men ready to seize the day

    I seek the obscure and solitude and there in the shadows stay

     

    How do the common decide who is worthy of a hero’s name?

    What elevates the man who encloses his life to that certain level of fame? 

    For I am just a man you see with no answers to banish the bad

    I only know how to go through this life as friend, husband, and dad

     

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    jj1562 commented on A Hero's Query

    03-13-2010

    Great job it had a good rhythm and a nive flow. two thumbs up.

    dumplin commented on A Hero's Query

    10-19-2009

    Wow, this is fantastic! I loved the flow of it and I feel you. Thanks for sharing.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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