Afraid...

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  • hippiegirl
  • I'd rather be hated for who I am than loved for who I am not

Poem Commentary

i've never written one like this before, feels a little strange. but its real and i needed to write it down..

Afraid...

Glasses empty, music playing, incense fills the air...
Looking at me, talking softly, his hand touches my hair.
Leaning closer, breathing faster,
"Close your eyes i'll take you there"...

Lying in bed, what happens now?
Hear the distant thunder
Rain starts to fall like tears from my eyes,
Words unspoken make me wonder...

Sitting up now, wear my heart on my sleeve,
He tells me its real, he'll never hurt me, it kills him to see me cry.
Feels good right now, being with him...
Don't want him to leave.

I look at him, brush the hair from his face,
And I say:
"My feelings for you make me afraid,
Cause the ones I love most go away...
They leave me for the book of death,
Or a line of poison powder,
Scars on my wrists will always remind me of the pain that bled me dry."

He frowns and says,
"But thats not me"...
He's right, i'll give it a try.
 
I can't always be afraid.

I like the way his blue eyes shine,
And the way that his lips grin.
I like the way he seems so shy, asking
"When can I see you again?"

Don't leave.
I dream sweet dreams with him by my side,
Afraid now of waking up....

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lastyl commented on Afraid...

12-14-2010

Very well written, we all can be afraid from past experiences but if we don't take chances we'll never find what it is we're looking for. Wonderful piece, looking forward to reading more of your poetry!!

shywoodrose commented on Afraid...

08-09-2010

Lovin it :) lovin the love that inspires us to live in love and share the love the lives in us.

MindNumbing commented on Afraid...

03-30-2010

I am SO happy that I stumbled upon this. It was almost painful to read because your emotional scars are so apparent, but the writing and the sentiment are positively beautiful.

hippiegirl

03/31/2010

thank you so much for the comment, i'm glad you liked it...i've actually read several of your pieces and they are all beautifully written. you're a great poet.

bryanpaul86 commented on Afraid...

03-26-2010

Wow. I love stories, and when poems tell stories. Write more poems like this, it's incredible.

DylanClark commented on Afraid...

03-25-2010

I like it. Glad you wrote this. Nice work ----------

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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