Goodbye

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  • Sadness
    • hippiegirl
    • I'd rather be hated for who I am than loved for who I am not

    Goodbye

     I gave you my heart
    and you ripped it out
    told you my dreams
    and you shot them down.
    You tore me apart
    now I am lonely...
    you killed me inside...
    now i feel nothing.
    You put me in solitary confinement
    I really feel as if i'm dying.
    I can't do this anymore
    I'm dead to the world
    Goodbye, my love, we are no more.

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    alb29oclfl commented on Goodbye

    03-24-2010

    a gift of love a most wondered gift, a sadness prevails for those who can not partake of it's bounty, hate must destroy, it has no other purpose, nicely conveyed
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    earthly commented on Goodbye

    03-24-2010

    Isn't great to write? Poetry can be so many things-it can speak about our emotions-conveyed well can enlighten us and provide us with a safe way to rant, vent,cry,smile,think....AND anyone who ever mistreats is not worth being with-Namaste...Earthly
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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