Airstream

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    Airstream

    Slowly the wind embraces me,
    Making my soul feel free,
    Releasing all stress in me,
    Making my life full of glee

    Throwing my sufferings away,
    I gladly endure the windy day,
    I follow the wind's direction,
    Towards life's perfection

    The wind blows my hair,
    As to the stars at night i stare,
    The wind caresses my face,
    As my dreams i joyfully chase

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    nhorlandi commented on Airstream

    04-03-2009

    the flowing of rhymes is smooth, excellent and perfect. Love it, keep writing please +10

    Phoenix9 commented on Airstream

    01-19-2009

    very nice, good style i enjoyed it alot

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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