Emptiness

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    Emptiness

    In the emptiness I see,

    In the emptiness I seek,

    In the emptiness I cry,

    In the emptiness I fly,

    In the emptiness I hear silence,

    In the emptiness I find reverence,

    In the emptiness I think,

    In the emptiness I fit,

    In the emptiness I feel,

    In the emptiness I heal,

    In the emptiness I recover,

    In the emptiness....

    I surrender

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    DeepEclipse commented on Emptiness

    04-15-2010

    Nice twist. Unexpected ending. In emptiness perhaps we have nothing but growth ahead of us. What else is there to lose? All the gain lays ahead. A bright spot in the darkness perhaps. Well written.

    nhorlandi commented on Emptiness

    03-18-2009

    the is the first encounter with you, however I don't see any blank paper before me. I can see nicely written piece of work, great rhyming though.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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