Amazing

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    Amazing


    Amazing

    I want to be amazing

    Yet we still try to bubble into this world like it’s the SAT’s

    Standard and General

    But I just want to be amazing

    At times I look up at the sky waiting

    To see a broken star fall

    See instead of just feel something broken

    Isn’t it amazing how your eyes only fixate

    On the outer workings of each other’s body’s

    How big is only good in two places

    And as he walks over an looks into my eyes

    No not these two little things that don’t qualify

    But my eyes and says amazing

    Like the 1st ray of the sunrise glissading off the ocean in your eye amazing

    Like the taste of your breathe amazing

    For you will never be me

    Therefore I will always remain amazing

     

     

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    lastyl commented on Amazing

    08-28-2009

    lol, that was very good, and yes you are amazing :) I exspecially liked the ending!!! Thanks again for the good write!!
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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