They

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    They

     

     They talk about me

    Stare in jealousy

    Acting like they care

    Giving these fake hugs

    Reopening barely healing scars

    Each word carving deeper

    Smiling

    I bleed internally

    My heart yarns for an escape

    Trapped

    Torn

    I sit isolated

    In a room full

    Of my blood

    This is the only bond we have

    For they don’t love me

    And frankly I don’t care

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    mamasan commented on They

    11-04-2009

    I hear you and while not attempting to minimize your feelings of entrapment and isolation; it seems they have the problem not you. You are a thinking young lady and I predict you will get thru because you know the secret......the power is within you not them.
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    christliked commented on They

    11-04-2009

    I was eaten up the same way and now at 50 they have not changed and the only suffering was mine. They will continue to justify every attitude and action so get free. Forgive them and go on because God is trying to save you by helping you understand the source of true love and none of them have it. read my poem Black Sheep
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    boomboom56 commented on They

    09-17-2009

    Such pain and heartache. Your words cause tears to well in my eyes for you. I don't know where the anger comes from, but it is there. You seem to write effortlessly. Keep it up young lady.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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