Angel's Wings, Angel's Voice

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    I've known Abeuelita1--a woman of many names, among them the well-deserved name Super Angel--for quite a long time now. From the beginning, she has understood my poetry very well, and what I have meant to say in my various poems; and she has stayed with me, when so many others left me, with her supporting, caring love. She and all her loved ones are always in my prayers. Please read her wonderful poems. And please, never rate her less than a 10. // God bless you, Tiny Dancer, for letting me, so often and so long, rest on your angel's wings. --Love, Michael

    Angel's Wings, Angel's Voice


    A haiku for Abuelita1, aka Super Angel


    Angel, your wings here--
    Voice of caring, healing love--
    Ease my pain and fear.

    =============================


    Written by Michael LP
    aka MLP, aka Mr. Poet, aka PoetWithCancer, aka PWC
    (I'm just me)
    Written on Wednesday, October 27, 2010  1:24 PM
    61 degrees F.  15% humidity.  Forecast: overcast 
    Copyright 2010 by Michael L.P.  All rights reserved
    (Except that Abuelita1 is free to use or publish this poem in any magazine, pamphlet, book, forum, Internet site, or any other medium, she may please)

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    arronpalmer commented on Angel's Wings, Angel's Voice

    10-28-2010

    Whether you meant to or not, I felt sudden overwhelming sadness reading this, particularly the last line. You sound so vulnerable, helpless, pleading. I hope you stay strong mate.

    abuelita1

    10/28/2010

    arron, Michael is stronger than what he realizes. I've seen him come a long way. He has a lot of people that care about him, and are here whenever he needs.

    lunamarie commented on Angel's Wings, Angel's Voice

    10-27-2010

    ... this is perfect ... a perfect description of Super ... Super Angel ... well done, Mr. Poet ............

    abuelita1

    10/28/2010

    lol Luna. You think?? Super

    lunamarie

    10/28/2010

    Yes! Yes! ... it is you! ... I hear your voice! ... I see your wings! ... haha! ..........

    abuelita1

    10/28/2010

    Love to you, Luna! I miss you, girl.......

    lunamarie

    10/28/2010

    xoxoxo! ... :)

    abuelita1 commented on Angel's Wings, Angel's Voice

    10-27-2010

    Just as I was feeling at my lowest YOU gave me your wings to rest on. I guess I'm not the ONLY angel around here. lol ;)

    abuelita1 commented on Angel's Wings, Angel's Voice

    10-27-2010

    Michael, OMG!! Thank you, Michael!! Thank you!!!! This is so appreciated, and so are you!

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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