Apart

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    • justme1970
    • is wanting some comments on these poems,,,,,,good or bad

    Apart

    I see you sometimes
    and my heart skips a beat
    what I wouldn't give
    if you'd call and say "Let's Meet"

    I have so much to tell you
    so many things to explain
    I want you to know how much I care
    and take away some of this pain

    you've always had a special way
    of making me feel so good
    even after an argument
    or if Im just in a bad mood

    I feel as if I owe you
    a special piece of my heart
    but I cant repay your love
    if we remain apart.....


                               Sharon Allen

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    Wakeitha commented on Apart

    06-17-2009

    Excellent words, you have gift in writting love poems. Keep writting because I love reading them.

    justme1970

    06/17/2009

    Thanks you very much.....Alot of my writing is whatever Im going thru at that moment. Thanks for everything and keep reading.....

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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    After All 2
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