Apart

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    • justme1970
    • is wanting some comments on these poems,,,,,,good or bad

    Apart

    I see you sometimes
    and my heart skips a beat
    what I wouldn't give
    if you'd call and say "Let's Meet"

    I have so much to tell you
    so many things to explain
    I want you to know how much I care
    and take away some of this pain

    you've always had a special way
    of making me feel so good
    even after an argument
    or if Im just in a bad mood

    I feel as if I owe you
    a special piece of my heart
    but I cant repay your love
    if we remain apart.....


                               Sharon Allen

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    Wakeitha commented on Apart

    06-17-2009

    Excellent words, you have gift in writting love poems. Keep writting because I love reading them.

    justme1970

    06/17/2009

    Thanks you very much.....Alot of my writing is whatever Im going thru at that moment. Thanks for everything and keep reading.....

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

    justme1970’s Poems (7)

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    "Just Friends" 3
    I'm Still Here 2
    Apart 1
    Mistakes Can Happen 1
    After All 2
    Broken Promises 1
    My Two Little Boys 2