Broken Promises

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    Broken Promises

    I set up an evening
    just me and you
    but you came in, to leave again
    with better things to do

    I sit alone and wonder
    what could be wrong with me
    cause everytime I plan something
    there's somewhere else you'de rather be

    Just once I wish
    you'd do the things you say
    instead of leaving me alone
    and going your own way

    It doesnt do me any good
    to just sit here and cry
    so as long as we're together
    I can only wonder "why"



                                    Sharon Allen

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    Wakeitha commented on Broken Promises

    06-17-2009

    Beautiful words with this poem, make a person feel what you talking about and like you there. Keep up the great written.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

    justme1970’s Poems (7)

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    I'm Still Here 2
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    After All 2
    Broken Promises 1
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