I'm Still Here

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    • justme1970
    • is wanting some comments on these poems,,,,,,good or bad

    I'm Still Here

    You told me the news
    it was so hard to believe
    but I said a little prayer
    and sighed with relief

    you decided to come back to me
    because your love hadn't died
    you couldn't go out with her
    but you admitted you tried

    God only knows how much I care
    just how much you mean to me
    Deep inside my heart Im crying
    wanting, begging you to see

    I cant go on like this
    living day by day
    watching every move I make
    watching everything I say

    you know "I Love You"
    and your the man I want
    the love I have to offer you
    can't be sold or bought

    Please understand my feelings
    know how much I care
    keep me in your heart and mind
    If you want me, Im here........


                                             Sharon Allen

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    Wakeitha commented on I'm Still Here

    06-17-2009

    I like that poem very touching, felt like you was talking about me. But we hold on things we want but it not what we need.

    wheelsal commented on I'm Still Here

    06-11-2009

    A touching poem of love and loss. Something that hurts but we hold on to - perhaps much to long before we let go.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

    justme1970’s Poems (7)

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    "Just Friends" 3
    I'm Still Here 2
    Apart 1
    Mistakes Can Happen 1
    After All 2
    Broken Promises 1
    My Two Little Boys 2