Behind the Facade

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  • Angst
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  • Dark Poetry
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  • Sadness

    Behind the Facade

     Look at what you made me do

    Hell is what you've put me through

    I thought things were going quite well

    But you hide what you're feeling and it's hard to tell

    I don't know what I did to make you angry

    The way you looked at me was agony

    The cold blade of the knife

    Will help me to end this strife

    The blood paves the way to peace

    Pain is the ultimate release

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    johnnyqueer commented on Behind the Facade

    07-14-2010

    this is nice, ive been in that position before.
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    winterkou commented on Behind the Facade

    07-12-2010

    I like your style of writing too. Short but very well worded and nice rhyme scheme
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    brokenhearted11 commented on Behind the Facade

    06-18-2010

    ex-freaking-zactly. exactly. i cant say it enough. exactly. amazing. :)
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    gregster commented on Behind the Facade

    05-11-2010

    wow.....simple and powerful very interesting piece of work here
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    Musicmynded1 commented on Behind the Facade

    04-29-2010

    Well rounded storyline within the dark of the tale..... Keep up the good work
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    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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    the not so immaculate 8 02/12/2010
    Why 9 02/11/2010
    What's Hidden Within 6 02/08/2010
    The Cutter 15 02/01/2010
    You and Me 9 01/25/2010
    Letting Go 12 01/05/2010
    Alone 15 07/13/2009
    The Depression of Youth 18 06/19/2009
    Promises 6 05/28/2009
    Good-bye 5 05/27/2009
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    Darkness 9 05/26/2009
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