Being Near You !!

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    This poem was written May 29 of 2007, I had convinced myself that i was in love with someone that didn't even stand 4 our marriage he had no back bone he was no support to our family,and his parents are racist "i still respected them til this day" but still I stayed strong and cared the load of being a mother wife hard worker and friend..Im now proud to say that I got out of that relationship but you dnt always see clearly when u think your in love....

    Being Near You !!

     Careing for you isn't hard
    Wanting you isn't hard
    reaching out to you is no struggle
    kissing you is no issue

    I love being near you...
    yea i know I'm writting on paper and it maybe strange
    to be doing so at the age of 20 but I had to let u know that our relationship will only grow when/ and if I open up to you !!

    you see, I saw u as a friend ..
    I see you you as a man
    I'm with you in a relationship
    I care for you as I did when we fwere just friends..

    Feelings are deep and compassionate
    Feelings are true as I will be to you,
    my love will becomestrong as a hawk.. and a lion
    Our relationship will grow as we grow together as one..
    Being near You ...

    I plan to become your lover, and remain your friend, a shoulder, a back bone thru thick and thin
    for yo I pray that you feel this same way too
    and once our spirits grow together we will alwasy remain near to each other !!

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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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