Loving You

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I personally love this poem ..it touches me in my heart it's pure and it can be mis-understood...

Loving You

I want to be loving you like no other
Who knows what's going to happen in the future
I don't care any more
I want 2 love you like no other

Not a red rose can compare to your sent
Not one song as sweet as a love song can compare to your voice
Not a poem can compare to the words that I want to tell you
Not a kodak picture or a perfect or painting can compare to your face

I want to be loving you like no other
I sit next to you in lonely sorrow
wanting you to be a little closer to me but I don't show it
my facial expressions are differnt from my body language and opposite from what I'm truely feeling
Being the love of your life is were I want to be

Loving You,

I want to be the one loving you, when your down and sad
I want to be the one kissing your sweet lovely cheeks when a tear drop falls from your eyes

I am the one you dream of each night
When will you let me in it's not the one you've been chatting with or texting :
I am the love of your life I am here in your heart Please let me love you...
I want to be loving you ...

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Savant commented on Loving You

01-25-2010

Sounds like a bit more than a crush. It has a hint of jealousy, a sprinkle of authenticity, with a dash of "may need a strait jacket". Very understandable piece. It reads like a personal account of an actual moment in your life. It would be really awesome if you wrote this purely from the imagination. I can dig it.

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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