Blood on the moon

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  • Sadness
    • Infect
    • Finding my wings. Be they of feather or leather, I shall wear them with pride, for they are my own..

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    inspired by a drunken brother

    Blood on the moon

    There is blood on the moon,

    said a man lying on the floor.

    It overflowed and landed there,

    the earth simply could hold no more.

    Drenching soil and minds alike,

    it had to find somewhere else to go.

    So it seems the river will never end,

    and it's start, far to drowned to know.

    Weeping in the dark, screams filling the night,

    desires twisted and deemed so wrong.

    There is now blood on the moon,

    in a demented swan song..

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    Waterwizard2005 commented on Blood on the moon

    01-27-2010

    I like this one. I like your perspective and viewpoint. At the 8th line it is its with no comma, right? I'm giving you a 10/10

    inkmaster commented on Blood on the moon

    01-27-2010

    Nice and dark..The way I like them...Inkmaster!....This rocks.." is out earning wings, be they of feather or leather." dig that ...

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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