Blue Eyes

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    Blue Eyes

    Teardrops of old
    Beneath the folds,
    Desperate words will not
    be heard.

    Embroidered dolls smell
    of mold.
    Will his heart be ever cold?

    Beneath the stars,
    This man distorts what
    exist in his heart.

    Many faces may be seen.
    But one is always hid behind
    Big blue eyes.

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    dahlusion commented on Blue Eyes

    09-29-2009

    Beautifully composed with poetic power, deep thought, and strong metering.

    adacn

    10/01/2009

    thank you, words always seem to flow from the valley of our whole.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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