Unfinished Past

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Unfinished Past

Sudden pang, vague respite,
Staggering girl, burning thighs,
Whispers escape with soft cries
at night.

Her plight so fertile
her brilliance well finished.
Mysteries of a heart grown old,
Eyes full circle under twilight skies,

Wandering will treads streams of  air,
Conquering world battles all her
convictions.

Peace kneeling at her splendor,
Passion pulsating beneath last grasp,
Overwhelmed by pure serenity
Thus farewell of the mind
to reckon with eternity and
ponder on a past.

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ginga commented on Unfinished Past

06-20-2010

ada, This poems emotes so many feelings/images that are quite inspiring for the reader.It transcends what we as humans ponder in our lives.Loved it new friend. ginga

dahlusion commented on Unfinished Past

12-18-2009

The poetic flow of this piece is brilliant; you have crafted a poetic gem of crystal clear imagery. Bravo!!

adacn

12/20/2009

Again, thank you for your reassuring words Your poetry is truly heartfelt. Again, thank you and keep writing which you do uniquely

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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Unfinished Past 2
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