Brain Damage

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  • Confusion

    Brain Damage

    My mind eludes me,
    static that won't turn off
    ...left over...
    It has taken over
    all that is left of
    the twenty four ...

    a reminder of the danger of
    frequent and convenient use...

    the need started slowly and surely

    insanity...inevitable

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    BrielleC commented on Brain Damage

    03-14-2009

    Nice work!!! wow!

    Plot121 commented on Brain Damage

    03-14-2009

    I liked this opening it made you want to read more. I think if out played out more exsamples and structure this would be a great piece. Robert...

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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