Friendship Defined

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    Friendship Defined

    Twenty four seven,
    Sent from heaven?

    Friends together
    no matter the weather

    True blue,
    me to you

    you to me
    we shall see

    needing each other eternally

    through thick and thin
    we always win

    nothing can upset the balance within

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    Plot121 commented on Friendship Defined

    03-21-2009

    straight to the point and clear I think you could have given more exsamples so the reader can chew on more but the work was done well. Robert...

    BrielleC commented on Friendship Defined

    03-17-2009

    You ahve a very interesting way of connecting your thoughts... i feel the flow.. even though it looks like there should be more... it works as is and it says all it needs to!

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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