Time

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    Time
    Cold to start this amazing part
    spring is seen in all the green
    preening weeds, grow like seeds
    the warming part soon will start

    The month of June not too soon
    t-shirts, shorts, recreational sports
    tykes, trikes, soccer shoe spikes
    lots of hots, brats and kiddie trots


    A harvest moon...owls croon
    goblins, ghouls, witches drool
    bobbin' apples, colored leaves
    more on ground than in the trees


    Cold coming quick makes me sick
    white and clear,oh so near
    cars find ditches, one only wishes
    heated home, pleasure dome

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    BrielleC commented on Time

    03-17-2009

    mmm gives a nice chilly feeling like you can feel the seasons change... nice way to put a sense of physical sensation in your words.
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