Broken

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    Broken

     My heart is broken
    From a token
    Everywhere you are
    Like a star
    Where oh where
    Are you there
    I need you here
    With me always
    To keep me from
    Being totally broken
    Without you I cant
    Pick up the pieces
    There are too many
    My heart is broken plenty
    Please honey fix me
    I am not free
    I need you with me
    Help me not be broken.

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    SEVEN commented on Broken

    09-24-2009

    Awww....if my gurl wrote somethin to this effect I would come at her with super glue..wink....good write....Kudos...P.S. don't depend on others to help or u may find yourself broken still...
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    dumplin commented on Broken

    09-24-2009

    In this piece, the flow is rather scattered and I found your plea so desperate. Keep reaching within yourself to find the right words to express what you feel and never ever feel like you need someone else to help put you back together. That's something you have to do all on your own.
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    bforibus commented on Broken

    09-24-2009

    i love the hopes of something else to depend on. it takes a lot of courage to ask for help and this poem was full of humility.. great job
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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