Waiting For You

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    Waiting For You

     I wait for you
    All alone in the dark
    I sit here wondering when you will come back
    To save me from myself
    I am wondering how long must I wait for you
    I feel like your trophy you put on the shelf
    Only to take down and admire at times
    To tell your friends about in time
    I wait for you
    To tell me you really love me
    All I hear are the words
    Show me you love me
    I am waiting for you
    To say you need me and want me to stay
    Here i am in the dark
    Hoping we will never part
    How am I to know which way to go
    Tell me whats in your heart
    I need to know
    I wait for you......

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    cjmason commented on Waiting For You

    10-02-2009

    awsome I guess i've been there too and i still am waiting for that feeling and trust and sencerity that you wrote about
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    Cakeboy9 commented on Waiting For You

    10-01-2009

    WOW!!!! I feel like U can see what is in my heart. I feel so light. Gr8 work. All the best.
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    DeepEclipse commented on Waiting For You

    10-01-2009

    Sometimes I see this as a bane of mine.....to need another. It seems to be how life is written though. A good pour of openness, pleading for that connection that can bloom into trust. But ah.....how stubborn we can be...
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    SEVEN commented on Waiting For You

    09-24-2009

    Dang, is he gone out for a pack of smoke and have yet to return?lol...No woman should wait for a man to make up his mind to say and show how much he cares.....If hes a real man--well not to say like me(wink)---but, he should be able to show his feelings....Good write, Kudos
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    dumplin commented on Waiting For You

    09-24-2009

    I've been here so many times in my life. Have you read my piece called "Is It You?" I think you'd like it. Great job.
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    poetsara113’s Poems (6)

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