Love?

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    Love?

     What is love?
    I thought I knew of this
    This feeling I have
    Can I be me?
    What do you really think of me?
    Am I your mate?
    Or am I the one you hate?
    I have lots to know about love
    Why is it ,you I thought were a dove
    I know now it isnt love
    How I hurt inside
    i am already melted by your love
    Now I have to slam shut the chambers of my heart
    Love?
    You say you love me




    Now all you do is bring me down
    Love?
    How do I go on when i know you lied to me
    You say you love me
    How can this be love?

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    BrokenHeart2009 commented on Love?

    07-26-2010

    Maybe he lies because he is afraid of the truth that he loves but he does''t want to be with you. He is afraid of losing you, but he is also afraid of losing you. You petry is very good, and I like it. To the point, and very truthful.
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    stellar commented on Love?

    09-27-2009

    oh maybe he is lying because he loves you...but this is so contradictory..if you love someone..you should be honest with her because trust is one of the 4 components of love..love this poem
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    koolmom0 commented on Love?

    09-24-2009

    Wow!! I have felt this way before, I hope you find your true love and he treats you well. Koolmom
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    1990lh commented on Love?

    09-23-2009

    awwwww very nice poem yup luv is awod ppl used to often nice read
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    Mrpoetry commented on Love?

    09-23-2009

    First the guy only said those words just to get some. so he played with your heart.. second never be afraid to love again because true love comes from God above
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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