Waterfalls

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    Waterfalls

     I have been looking at these waterfalls
    Thinking of you
    How our love is
    It is similiar to these
    Everflowing cascading pouring
    Into the depths of my soul
    Oh beautiful waterfalls
    You are my very essence
    I feel your very presence
    All around me like these rushing waves
    Overflowing me taking me into your arms
    How I dream of this love
    So perfect and true and pure
    Like this waterfall
    Everflowing clear and beautiful
    Is our love..

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    stellar commented on Waterfalls

    10-19-2009

    Very witty...the analogy is lovely as the falls you mentioned...^_^ v
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    SuperChick76 commented on Waterfalls

    10-02-2009

    Nice poem. I found you rhythm a bit off, and I'm not sure if you were trying to rhyme or not. It was very decent poem, just, bit of a cliche and like I said, the rhythm and rhyme(I think) was a bit off. All in all, it was a very pleasant read. Good job.
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    inklost commented on Waterfalls

    10-01-2009

    that's a good feeling isn't it quote to be loved to be loved if all for none to be loved. bye me !! keep write i loved it
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    SEVEN commented on Waterfalls

    10-01-2009

    Aww....true love...I wished my gf wrote me poem like this....That lucy s.o.b....good write....Kudos
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    koolmom0 commented on Waterfalls

    10-01-2009

    AWWWWWWW You must have written this for your fella. Sweet Poem. Koolmom
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    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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    Waterfalls 7 10/01/2009
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    Longing 2 09/24/2009
    Waiting For You 6 09/23/2009
    Love? 6 09/16/2009
    Broken 3 08/15/2009
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