Can it be?

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    Can it be?

     When one passes, is their job here done?

    Were we meant to meet for a reason?

    A small group of friends.

    A sickly friend who needd care.

    The Angel in all their eyes cared for the sick.

    But the married couple who were not happy, the Angel caught his eye from day one.

    She knew better than to chase a married man.

    Now he is widowed, and the sick that she had taken care of is better and hates her so very much.

    Was the Angel meant to meet the unhappy couple and one day find happiness in her life?

    How could happiness come out of ones death?

    I dont know but the smilesand laughter he has given to the Angel are amazing.

    Hes NEVER let The Angel down...... but she is scared just another wounded man with a broken crown.

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    Kaiprin commented on Can it be?

    12-18-2009

    'just another wounded man with a broken crown': I liked that part of your last line. Can anything good come from death? Great topic for discussion. Keep writing. I felt your emotion coming through in your words.
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    wickedink

    05/05/2010

    My emotions are in such turmoil now. Can you feel my pain?

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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