Lost

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    Lost

    Who is she?
    Nobody knows.
    She appeared like a flash of light and held some kind of mystery.
    They were bedazzled by the twinkling in her eyes.
    Bewildered that she left them.
    She blew in with a smile and grace,something she hadnt seen on her own very face.
    Her inner child came out for awhile to play,but soon realized she was just passing days.
    Days that began with happiness and laughter, but soon found out what she was chasing after.
    The chase was a monster ready to swallow her whole.
    She realized she must run before she gets old.
    She is no ones play, not a piece of meat, she is a woman now who needs to plant her feet.
    She went back to her town , where no one knows her or her nameand there she will stay till her dying day........

    Poet; Wickedink 2009

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    Kaiprin commented on Lost

    12-18-2009

    This one was really good. 'She is a woman who now needs to plant her feet' and 'Where no one knows her name and there she will stay until her dying day' are very touching lines for me. It leaves more to be desired. Special work Wicked. Keep 'em coming.

    wickedink

    05/05/2010

    Thank you for all you say. It means alot to me that you actually read my shit!,lol!

    wildpendigus commented on Lost

    06-18-2009

    It's aa ver interesting title, but you arenot lost I think you have a good sense of direction and you write from the heart and about your life's experiencesand you are very emotional about what you see feel and hear, which I think is good, you could record this poem it would be a good poem. grecowong@yahoo.com

    wickedink

    07/23/2009

    Thank you so much for the kind words, makes a girl put a smile on her face!

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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