Complete

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    for my love, who is far far away.

    Complete
    Someday my love, Ill be by your side every night.
    I'll stay in your arms, 'till each mornings light. 
    And then as we stir and we wake, 
    A kiss I will give, pleased with my fate. 
    You are my love, my reality, my dreams.
    Only in your arms, am I complete.  

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    Artie commented on Complete

    02-27-2010

    A very nice write - full of love and passion - 10 from me
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    redbloodink commented on Complete

    02-24-2010

    a complete write.................................... red
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    Musicmynded1 commented on Complete

    02-24-2010

    .................................................................................Sweet
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    kpeery09 commented on Complete

    02-24-2010

    Very Nice, I love it, you truly do create masterpieces. I give you 10 for a good write.
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    mariadapoesia commented on Complete

    02-24-2010

    Oh... so romantic! I'm sure your love will be pleased with your beautiful words... Sweet!
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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