Cool

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    • bacar10
    • BACK IN MOTION. I TOOK A YEAR OFF WRITING POETRY BUT RANDOM FEELINGS ARE BACK SO STAY TUNED. I JUST POSTED A NEW POEM 3 DAYS AGO CALLED WIFE. I HOPE YOU ENJOY

    Cool

    Crease in my pants, shine on my shoe,
    Silk button down, starting to feel cool.

    Walk is correct, posture is smooth,
    Vocabularty is advanced, starting to feel cool.

    A living rebel, living with no rules,
    Living like I want to, starting to feel cool.

    Twenty something years, going to school,
    Studying my major, starting to feel cool.

    Can fix any problem without any tool,
    My fix is a problem, starting to feel cool.

    Not too easy but not so cruel,
    Being in between, starting to feel cool.

    Deep in thought, deeper than a pool,
    Drowning in water, I don't feel cool.

    Food for thought is my body's fuel,
    Fashion, posture, and rules doesn't make you cool.

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    Mau commented on Cool

    09-15-2009

    This poem makes you Cool!! You are what you think!! Nice job.

    bacar10

    09/15/2009

    tHANKYOU.

    Arisinginthesun commented on Cool

    08-24-2009

    This is truly AWESOME and creative! Keep up the good work. I'm sure the masses agree.

    JamilahAyanna commented on Cool

    06-03-2009

    I lyked dis poem, it had a very smooth vibe goin within it, very nyce keep doin ya thing and ya otha 1's r hot 2...

    bacar10

    06/17/2009

    Thankyou. It is nice to meet talented people such as yourself

    NayInLove commented on Cool

    02-27-2009

    nice poem hun :)

    bacar10

    06/17/2009

    I'm glad you enjoy it

    Claude commented on Cool

    02-27-2009

    I dig it. Put up some more!

    bacar10

    06/17/2009

    i got u

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    bacar10’s Poems (7)

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    Wife 2
    Angel 2
    Dear World 1
    I Miss Love 0
    The Show 0
    My Life 2
    Cool 5