The Show

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    • bacar10
    • BACK IN MOTION. I TOOK A YEAR OFF WRITING POETRY BUT RANDOM FEELINGS ARE BACK SO STAY TUNED. I JUST POSTED A NEW POEM 3 DAYS AGO CALLED WIFE. I HOPE YOU ENJOY

    The Show

    What a great time I had at the show,
    At the beginning was boredom,
    But interest soon came to grow,
    The beginning sure did reveal the end,
    Leaving no sequel for a new story to begin,
    Action, Drama, Comedy, and Suspense so confusing,
    No fantasy cartoons, no illusions,
    If there is a sequel, then I left out mystery,
    If there is a sequel, then this show made history,
    Rated everybody, because the truth prevails,
    TV is broke, well a book works when all else fails,
    This show was great; it had a sad ending,
    Most shows are typical cause everyone's always winning,
    Most sad endings reveal a message, so learn,
    Let me critique the show because its my turn,
    I wish I can see it twice,
    But I can't because the show is my life.

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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

    bacar10’s Poems (7)

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    Wife 2
    Angel 2
    Dear World 1
    I Miss Love 0
    The Show 0
    My Life 2
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